Wednesday 16 May 2018

Hydro Slide Recount

Up really high, my hands shook like the washing machine on full. Miniature bumps grew on my skin.

All of a sudden it turned pitch black,it felt like the dark had taken me away.


Hi these are some sentences from my latest Writing Hydro Slide Recount. These sentences demonstrate my goal witch is Show not tell if you would like to read more click this link. Click here to read the full story.

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